I just started writing the scenes inside the "main compound" -- rather, headquarters buildings -- of the cult at the center of A Fox's Wedding.
And I don't know how it works. I mean, sure, I could scribble a map of the physical building. More or less. But I have so many questions, starting with --
Who is here? What is the purpose of this building?
Part of the problem is the hybrid nature of the "cult." Transcendence is primarily a business (well, all successful cults are more-or-less businesses), a small to mid-sized company known in-story mostly for the Genki brand of health-conscious cosmetics.
Which means that somewhere in the world are accountants, legal staff, sales, all the stuff that makes it possible to manufacture and ship product. They could be contracting out much of this. They could be locating those offices anywhere -- process development and quality control and all of that should be located at the factories, for instance.
This is a very hierarchal organization with an illusion of being a meritocracy so the headquarters in the hills outside Kyoto is very much the Special place where only the Special people get to work. The highest level execs, and of course the activities that aren't strictly about getting cold cream to market.
And I want it big enough to justify a small security staff. And a monorail. (The monorail is in-story a useless extravagance anyhow...the campus doesn't actually have to be big enough to need one!) It may end up in the end being a side comment by some character; "We wanted a monorail but...."
Anyhow, it is inspired by an actual building:
(Most of the in-the-cult sequence is when the James Bond basically fails. They know she's a spy, those kinds of tricks aren't working. So it is moving much more in a Chuck 2.0 direction with Penny getting a chance to put her own unique spin on things. And of course...at the end of it, the cult is in general as benign as the people behind the museum pictured above. It is the situation that gets out of hand...)
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