Trying to do that 1,000 words a day. I'd still like to be that productive but hitting a daily average is maybe not the best measure. Even if Scrivener does have some cute session and document target tracking tools.
I think of the time I spent building sets for theatre. Doing drafting and cutting pieces of wood for days. Assembling raw flats and platforms (because you need a lot of those) for weeks. Base them and turn them over to Scenic for painting. Then the day you start trucking the stuff over to the theater and start assembling it on stage, people are coming around with "You guys did a lot of work today."
So, yeah. I threw down a 1,400 word scene that included a lyrical description of a train ride through the Italian Alps (based largely on a single video I saw.) And then had to stop for two days; first to figure out if I was even on the right route. Then to find out what the weather was actually like in Brennen Pass at the time of year I'd set the scene in. The revision gained me another 200 so it wasn't all loss.
Discovery writing is always a bit give and take. I was planning on going directly to Padua, but I felt like putting another obstacle in. Verona was on the way. What do they have? Well, there's "Casa di Giulietta." The scene wrote itself. Verona also seemed to offer some opportunities; there's the Jewish Quarter of the central (old) city. A German synagogue that's been turned into a museum and some Jewish cemeteries. So I made a rough draft of the scene. But turns out both of the latter are off route for the natural path from railway station to my chosen osteria. So review and re-draft.
Plus I was sick today. Wrote anyhow...but when I hit the target, I stopped. So there's that, too.
I'm constrained in the Italy sequence in that it is really time to get back to Greece and the real focus of the story. Also, I've made the point of those first clumsy days of learning how to travel and there's no more need to do blow-by-blow. But that's turning out to be weird to accomplish.
See, I've been doing first-person immediate. That means that the only text that can appear on the page is what the character is actually thinking more-or-less contemporary with the action being presented. That's why the narration can't say, out of the blue, "I got maths degree at Oxford." Instead there has to be a trigger, say a couple of students singing the ribald University of Padua graduation song, so the narration can describe that and go on, "...we didn't have anything like that at Oxford."
I have several places where I want to go back and shift more things to dialog, where it is more natural anyhow.
In the same sense of discovery writing, I needed to show her texting a friend back home in one scene in order to get a clue to a third party. One thing led to another and that off-stage character has basically become a confidante. Someone my protagonist can dialog things to instead of narrating them in her head.
Another constraint is that I've already done the whole "learning to communicate" routine with German. I don't need and don't want to do Italian as well. So I'm forced to skip over, paper over, and otherwise leave a lot of stuff off stage. Just like I'm doing for finding directions, learning when and where to eat, and all that other good stuff. The theme for this sequence is, "Being a somewhat experienced traveler."
Not to say she shouldn't still make mistakes. In fact, I've decided she needs to make more. So another thing to go back and edit in. Have more of her stunts fail, and take things further; have her get actively embarrassed, have that sort of tongue-tied language meltdown you get when you are riding on half-remembered lessons and instinct and it fails you. Etc.
Oddly enough this is a lot less work than it sounds. The hard part was blocking the scenes and the general flow of dialog. I can give it a different spin in a lot less time.
So I spent the last half of my sick day watching videos from Dust. And more travel videos. I've done all I need to for Verona and the Padova sequence is almost entirely a conversation between two people having a meal at the Osteria l'Anfora.
I should add I can do that sort of thing (using videos and TripAdvisor entries and Google Maps and Frommer's) because I've actually been to Europe; to Athens and Paris and Berlin and Salzburg and more than a few smaller towns as well. So I can see what's not always there, like trash and tourists and weather, and fill in some of the sensory details like walking on cobblestones, and otherwise sanity check what I'm being shown.
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Wednesday, July 10, 2019
Wednesday, June 12, 2019
Hot Time in the Old Town
We're having a heat wave. Worst in my memory for this town because it just keeps going. It is just cool enough this morning I'm taking the excuse to go to work late so I can air out my place a little.
Finished back-filling on all the scenes I'd skipped over and I'm at a solid 26K now. Did a skim-read and it seems to hit the plot points at a decent pace.
I'm still concerned about the density of detail. (Actually, I have a lot of concerns, from title down to narrative voice, but anyhow). It is partially a problem of doing history. It is more a problem of doing a story about people who are passionate about history. I'd have the same problem if it were, say, cars.
History just makes it worse. You can name-drop "65 Mustang" and trust the average reader won't feel left out. Name-drop "Alcibiades" and it's a bit more of a question.
For both, though, if you chose to dig deeper it is a real question of where to stop. How much you have to explain. How many of the connections you can afford to explore. However, I think it is a little easier to make generic statements about what a 65 Mustang means. You can say "muscle car" and the idea comes across. "Vintage car" also works.
I suppose you can say "Peloponnesian War" and the idea of "some important war" gets across. But how do you say "Desecration of the Herms" and have any hope of communicating what that means without a lot more explanation to the reader?
In any case, one of the progressive edits I'm doing is taking out elements where I can, and expanding on others where it feels like it is too much of a naked name drop. Latest of those was replacing "...Helios chases Selene across the course of a day," with "...Helios in the Chariot of the Sun chases Selene the Goddess of the Moon across the course of a day." (It's an on-screen lecture about the Parthenon Friezes.)
I also trimmed most of the French-isms out of Océane's dialog, although I left, "And do not the phone in the back pocket," (as part of her advice to the neophyte tourist as to how to discourage pick-pockets).
Come to think of it, there's only one character in my roster who indulges in Gratuitous German (TVTropes link not provided). I don't count the frequent use of "hello" and "thank you" in whatever the local language because that is an important courtesy and I make a direct point in the novel of that being a good thing to learn. The one fellow who puts German words in when speaking in English to an English speaker is the same guy who is putting on an accent so patently false my protagonist starts calling him, "Herr Satz."
And, yeah, sure, it is partly having fun with language, but it is also reflective of the kind of code-switching that happens when you are navigating around multiple languages. In one conversation between two historians they may say "Temple of Hephaestus" at one moment, and "The Hephaestion" at another. When traveling in Germany I found myself saying "train station" at one moment and "bahnhof" at another. Even signs (especially in heavily touristed areas) both alternate and duplicate between languages. So it is an authentic part of the tourist experience to do this kind of code-switching.
Finished back-filling on all the scenes I'd skipped over and I'm at a solid 26K now. Did a skim-read and it seems to hit the plot points at a decent pace.
I'm still concerned about the density of detail. (Actually, I have a lot of concerns, from title down to narrative voice, but anyhow). It is partially a problem of doing history. It is more a problem of doing a story about people who are passionate about history. I'd have the same problem if it were, say, cars.
History just makes it worse. You can name-drop "65 Mustang" and trust the average reader won't feel left out. Name-drop "Alcibiades" and it's a bit more of a question.
For both, though, if you chose to dig deeper it is a real question of where to stop. How much you have to explain. How many of the connections you can afford to explore. However, I think it is a little easier to make generic statements about what a 65 Mustang means. You can say "muscle car" and the idea comes across. "Vintage car" also works.
I suppose you can say "Peloponnesian War" and the idea of "some important war" gets across. But how do you say "Desecration of the Herms" and have any hope of communicating what that means without a lot more explanation to the reader?
In any case, one of the progressive edits I'm doing is taking out elements where I can, and expanding on others where it feels like it is too much of a naked name drop. Latest of those was replacing "...Helios chases Selene across the course of a day," with "...Helios in the Chariot of the Sun chases Selene the Goddess of the Moon across the course of a day." (It's an on-screen lecture about the Parthenon Friezes.)
I also trimmed most of the French-isms out of Océane's dialog, although I left, "And do not the phone in the back pocket," (as part of her advice to the neophyte tourist as to how to discourage pick-pockets).
Come to think of it, there's only one character in my roster who indulges in Gratuitous German (TVTropes link not provided). I don't count the frequent use of "hello" and "thank you" in whatever the local language because that is an important courtesy and I make a direct point in the novel of that being a good thing to learn. The one fellow who puts German words in when speaking in English to an English speaker is the same guy who is putting on an accent so patently false my protagonist starts calling him, "Herr Satz."
And, yeah, sure, it is partly having fun with language, but it is also reflective of the kind of code-switching that happens when you are navigating around multiple languages. In one conversation between two historians they may say "Temple of Hephaestus" at one moment, and "The Hephaestion" at another. When traveling in Germany I found myself saying "train station" at one moment and "bahnhof" at another. Even signs (especially in heavily touristed areas) both alternate and duplicate between languages. So it is an authentic part of the tourist experience to do this kind of code-switching.
Monday, May 27, 2019
Athena Phone Home
Things have changed since I visited Germany. No, not Bad Münster am Stein; the Medieval Market festival and the jousting show are still there. Even the Austrian meistersinger we met is still there (at least as of a year or two ago.) No, what has changed is the way we approach it.
I sort of miss being able to puzzle out things. Testing my language skills understanding signs and explanations, my navigational skills, my anthropology and history skills. Now, we're not quite to the level of data overlays but my character can at any moment whip out her smart phone and figure out where she is, what you call it, who sells train tickets (or, for the latter, purchase them right from the phone).
The only thing that hampers this process is the wealth of information online and the poorly organized nature of it, a problem conflated by the priorities of those who post it. I went looking through videos of what the town looks like, and found a significant number about random trains that happened to pass through: rail fans are everywhere, it appears.
(Never did find any good images of the area around the bahnhof itself, but I figured out a much better way of handling the scene -- that doesn't require that data.)
Well, Verne would probably be similarly pleased and mildly disappointed that there are regular flights to practically everywhere. You don't have to hire a caravan of camels and drivers yourself.
I never bothered with a paper map in Athens, except for those that indicated there was a museum or archaeological site that didn't appear at any useful zoom level on Google Maps. It wasn't a perfect system; I had to go to the ferry office to have them print a paper ticket for what I had purchased online (unlike the airport, they don't have a handy machine to give you that hard copy; and both are unlike Deutsch Bahn, where you can just flash the conductor with the image on your smart phone.) But I'm also not one of the techno-cognoscenti; I have no interest in ever hiring an über and even AirBnB makes me wary, and those sorts of things give even more mobility.
There's also...it is interesting for me to know what I'm looking at, whether a historical building or just the name of a food item. You can get a bunch of this stuff via the phone, if you are willing to spend your vacation looking like you are hunting Pokemon. But at the same time interacting with people is even more fun than trying to read signs in another language. Given the choice between finding out what a graduation tower is, and having a conversation with a nice couple who have no idea what the thing is because they're from Lübeck, I'll take the Lübeckers and their amusing anecdote about marzipan. I can always look up how mineral spring spas work later.
I guess the long and short of it is that research is still hard. It is easier to look up what train goes where, but not terribly important to put in the book. And it is almost as hard as it ever was to find those boots-on-the-ground details; those things the reader can't find themselves in a few minutes with Google Maps.
And while we're on the phone; this is how I decided to handle text in my current story:
You know if I book now I could fly into Frankfurt in time for Oktoberfest and it would be under four hundred bucks? Yeah...I'll save that sort of expense for the next book. I'm still wanting to travel again, though.
I sort of miss being able to puzzle out things. Testing my language skills understanding signs and explanations, my navigational skills, my anthropology and history skills. Now, we're not quite to the level of data overlays but my character can at any moment whip out her smart phone and figure out where she is, what you call it, who sells train tickets (or, for the latter, purchase them right from the phone).
The only thing that hampers this process is the wealth of information online and the poorly organized nature of it, a problem conflated by the priorities of those who post it. I went looking through videos of what the town looks like, and found a significant number about random trains that happened to pass through: rail fans are everywhere, it appears.
(Never did find any good images of the area around the bahnhof itself, but I figured out a much better way of handling the scene -- that doesn't require that data.)
Well, Verne would probably be similarly pleased and mildly disappointed that there are regular flights to practically everywhere. You don't have to hire a caravan of camels and drivers yourself.
I never bothered with a paper map in Athens, except for those that indicated there was a museum or archaeological site that didn't appear at any useful zoom level on Google Maps. It wasn't a perfect system; I had to go to the ferry office to have them print a paper ticket for what I had purchased online (unlike the airport, they don't have a handy machine to give you that hard copy; and both are unlike Deutsch Bahn, where you can just flash the conductor with the image on your smart phone.) But I'm also not one of the techno-cognoscenti; I have no interest in ever hiring an über and even AirBnB makes me wary, and those sorts of things give even more mobility.
There's also...it is interesting for me to know what I'm looking at, whether a historical building or just the name of a food item. You can get a bunch of this stuff via the phone, if you are willing to spend your vacation looking like you are hunting Pokemon. But at the same time interacting with people is even more fun than trying to read signs in another language. Given the choice between finding out what a graduation tower is, and having a conversation with a nice couple who have no idea what the thing is because they're from Lübeck, I'll take the Lübeckers and their amusing anecdote about marzipan. I can always look up how mineral spring spas work later.
I guess the long and short of it is that research is still hard. It is easier to look up what train goes where, but not terribly important to put in the book. And it is almost as hard as it ever was to find those boots-on-the-ground details; those things the reader can't find themselves in a few minutes with Google Maps.
And while we're on the phone; this is how I decided to handle text in my current story:
There was a Greek coffee served sweet and thick and a house salad that had everything — down to some kind of brown-bread crouton — but no lettuce. After that and with two different pastries in front of me I could at last face the stack of messages.So tags and punctuation handled just like dialog, only omitting the quotation marks and using italics to set the quotes out instead. And notice also the word "texted" never appears, nor any other mention of the mechanics of phones. It isn't needed, any more than "he said" is needed after every line -- much less an explanation of how syllables are formed by the mouth and tongue.
Where have you been? Drea wanted to know. Are you okay? the next read. And many, many more of the same. Please respond, it’s almost midnight! said the last, sent twenty minutes ago.
I’m at breakfast, I sent. Did you forget the time difference?
Oh thank god. When I saw you fall I was so scared. Are you sure you’re okay?
You saw what now? I forked up another bite of ravani, syrup dripping off of it. I’d better get a lot more hiking in today. I stopped suddenly, grabbed at the phone. Biro sent you video? No wonder he’d had that guilty look all the way back to the hotel.
You know if I book now I could fly into Frankfurt in time for Oktoberfest and it would be under four hundred bucks? Yeah...I'll save that sort of expense for the next book. I'm still wanting to travel again, though.
Sunday, February 17, 2019
Travel truth and lies
The rain and cold are dragging at me. A project at work just got put on work-through-the-weekend priority. A school strike is messing up our tech schedule for the show I'm mixing. And then there was a little fire. Everyone is okay but half my tenants are displaced and contractors are slamming around at all hours and nobody is getting any sleep.
I'm going to talk about the novel progress in a bit, but first I'd like to share some of my own travel lessons.
There's the big three I learned from my mom:
1. Pack light
2. Reserve your first night's stay
3. Go to the water
In inverse order, there's a lot of advantages to a river. It is cooler -- going to the river saved us in Bangkok. The river is sometimes a simpler and straighter route -- I used the Thames to get from the Tower Bridge area to Greenwich and it was simpler than figuring out buses and Tube. But mostly, the river is a different world. The city is noise and smoke and crowds and, yes, tourists. The river shows you a slower and more gentle world and gives you glimpses of the working reality of the place outside of the shopping districts and tourist hotspots.
First night; I've amended my mom's method. She likes to spend the first day getting to know a town, wandering around, and finding somewhere both cheap and cool to stay for the rest of the trip. For Greece, I just paid everything up front so I wouldn't have to deal with it. The only adventure was finding the places when I landed. Which is the other key element here; splurge on that first night. You are jetlagged, it is two in the morning, you don't know the language or your way around. Sleep in a Western-style hotel that offers a shuttle service from the airport. You'll be a lot more rested and ready to deal with a whole new world after that.
Packing light: okay, I used to camp. Then I was in the Army, more, in the Paratroops. One dirty secret is that we may parachute in but all the gear a modern army needs to operate would be flown in or trucked in later to meet us. Thing is, it didn't always get there. So us experienced guys would jump with rain gear, a poncho liner to sleep on, some 550 cord, a knife, and enough food and water to keep going for a day or two.
Not saying I always get it right, but the pack for Crete was almost perfect. Here's the big trick; airlines currently allow two carry-ons (without paying extra); one larger that goes in the overhead, and a smaller one you can keep with you. I saw a lot of people on all six flights that didn't understand the advantage this gives. Moment the seatbelt light went off they were all back into the overhead bins making a commotion. I have a shoulder bag I picked up in Berlin -- sort of a small messenger bag. I put everything I thought I might need on the flight in there, including tickets and passport. Means I could check my larger bag if the airline asked me to. When I arrived I'd repack and it would be my day bag, holding camera and maps and charging stick.
Two changes of clothes. Enough to last a week and then you have something to wear while you do laundry. This was all casual walking stuff; I had no intention of dining anywhere fancy. But here's another trick; I know they are less comfortable, but prioritize trousers and long sleeves over shorts and t-shirts; a lot of other countries are less casual than the US and many places of worship won't even let you in with short sleeves.
I did bring camera but almost never used it. And no laptop. Not even any books. But if you are going to be doing everything off a smart phone (books, camera, writing with a neat little folding keyboard, even maps) then bring power stick and a charger that will let you do both at once.
Then there's a few other things that haven't quite made Three Rules level:
4. Learn "Hello" and "Thank you." This isn't always exact or plausible...getting the courtesy's out in Greece could be a race, Italy has way too many nuances of greeting and good-byes to easily memorize, and Japan is such a politeness-driven country it is well worth learning a variety of thankful and apologetic words (mine were Ohio gozaimasu, konbanwa, ano, dozo, ii desu....but if you learn nothing else, arigato will get you a long way.)
5. Watch people. This seems obvious. And like above it isn't always possible. I came close to getting on a bus in Athens before I noticed nobody was using cash...instead they flashed a card and there was a beeping sound. So then I started asking around where you bought that ticket. In Japan, there is a very clear understanding of which staircase goes up and which goes down so watch the crowd before you try to plunge Up the Down Staircase. A little watching of when and what the locals are doing will make you look a lot less like an Ugly American. (My counter-example in Greece was trying to figure out the correct way to drink coffee. I couldn't find anyone doing it, and asking was no help because in the places I was, the staff had long decided the crazy tourists were right no matter what they did.)
6. Adjust. I really shouldn't have to say this. If you want bed your way, burger made your way, toilet the way it is at home, then why are you traveling? If you really can't deal and just want to look at the sights then there are options. There are package tours that shift you from Western-Style hotel to Western-Style hotel in the air-conditioned embrace of a tour bus and the comforting arm of a tour guide. Or just stay home and watch the movie. I've witnessed far too many travelers who couldn't re-adjust to their expectations that coffee would be free with the buffet in Berlin, that there would be chairs at a noodle shop in Tokyo, that they could pay with American dollars in London. Instead of taking a step back and realizing "this is different here...so what else is different that I could be enjoying the benefits of?" they start arguing with the server. For food, for beds, for all sorts of things, my advice is try it. If you don't like it, then no shame on you and you'll find something you like eventually. If you do, though...that's something you've learned and might even take home with you.
7. The two-week rule. I've failed on this as often as I've followed it, but the idea is you want to stay at a place long enough to get past the "we have to climb the Eiffel and visit the Louve and Notre Dame..." Actually, you'll never visit everything in Paris. Point being, the first week is rushing around doing the typical tourist spots and the must-see's. The second week is when you can relax and take in the place. Sit in a cafe and people-watch; the pressure is done. Around a week is when you slowly transition from visiting to staying; you know the street layout, which buses you usually take, the place you like to eat at. Where to buy paper and do laundry. And this goes both ways. To the locals you move from "today's tourist" to "that quiet American with the crazy beard who's been coming in here every day."
With all the above commotion, though, I'm actually making progress on the novel. Have a draft now of the key moment when my protagonist puts on the mask for the first time.
Checked some more geography and I still haven't tracked down any Roman ruins or active digs in the Bad Münster area. Not that it matters for the plot; a medieval well is just as good for me. I did, however, discover a nice Roman mine that's about 50 km Northwest of Frankfurt. So far I've been honest with geography and although I may be adding a few things that aren't quite right (like transplanting the torchlight parade from another medieval fair to the one at Bad Münster) I haven't actually...lied.
Checked up on taking a train from Frankfurt to Venice. One day (or an overnight), a few hundred Euros. Depending on what times I plug in, though, the route planner either runs me through Switzerland or an Eastern route through Austria. Which possibly touches Salzburg (I've spent a couple days there). And also passes through München. That is, Munich (where I've also been, but only to change trains). And the story is set in October.
Oho. Thing is, the end of the shoulder season is late October and Oktoberfest actually ends on the first Sunday in October. My protagonist is also taking the latest flight she can before the prices go up and for me that was the 28th. So...move the shoulder earlier, or move Oktoberfest? Oh, yeah, and there's Ohi Day on the 28th, although the people I talked to in Crete didn't seem to think it was that much of a deal, an Athenian might disagree and in any case would play perfectly into what I want to say about the history of Greece after the Classical Era.
Sigh. I should have done something other than Germany. Kept the story in Greece, maybe included Crete. The thing about the German detour is that the way it is currently plotted she's going to be exploring around the Rhine and the Stein, into Bavaria and then to Austria, through the turned-cuff of the Italian boot and to the city of Venice (possibly stopping in Padua or Verona first), and then take a boat down the Adriatic. She'll be a seasoned -- well, semi-seasoned -- traveller by the time she gets back to Athens, and a lot of the first-time-out-figuring-stuff-out stuff I'd plotted was in the Athenian setting.
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I'm going to talk about the novel progress in a bit, but first I'd like to share some of my own travel lessons.
There's the big three I learned from my mom:
1. Pack light
2. Reserve your first night's stay
3. Go to the water
In inverse order, there's a lot of advantages to a river. It is cooler -- going to the river saved us in Bangkok. The river is sometimes a simpler and straighter route -- I used the Thames to get from the Tower Bridge area to Greenwich and it was simpler than figuring out buses and Tube. But mostly, the river is a different world. The city is noise and smoke and crowds and, yes, tourists. The river shows you a slower and more gentle world and gives you glimpses of the working reality of the place outside of the shopping districts and tourist hotspots.
First night; I've amended my mom's method. She likes to spend the first day getting to know a town, wandering around, and finding somewhere both cheap and cool to stay for the rest of the trip. For Greece, I just paid everything up front so I wouldn't have to deal with it. The only adventure was finding the places when I landed. Which is the other key element here; splurge on that first night. You are jetlagged, it is two in the morning, you don't know the language or your way around. Sleep in a Western-style hotel that offers a shuttle service from the airport. You'll be a lot more rested and ready to deal with a whole new world after that.
Packing light: okay, I used to camp. Then I was in the Army, more, in the Paratroops. One dirty secret is that we may parachute in but all the gear a modern army needs to operate would be flown in or trucked in later to meet us. Thing is, it didn't always get there. So us experienced guys would jump with rain gear, a poncho liner to sleep on, some 550 cord, a knife, and enough food and water to keep going for a day or two.
Not saying I always get it right, but the pack for Crete was almost perfect. Here's the big trick; airlines currently allow two carry-ons (without paying extra); one larger that goes in the overhead, and a smaller one you can keep with you. I saw a lot of people on all six flights that didn't understand the advantage this gives. Moment the seatbelt light went off they were all back into the overhead bins making a commotion. I have a shoulder bag I picked up in Berlin -- sort of a small messenger bag. I put everything I thought I might need on the flight in there, including tickets and passport. Means I could check my larger bag if the airline asked me to. When I arrived I'd repack and it would be my day bag, holding camera and maps and charging stick.
Two changes of clothes. Enough to last a week and then you have something to wear while you do laundry. This was all casual walking stuff; I had no intention of dining anywhere fancy. But here's another trick; I know they are less comfortable, but prioritize trousers and long sleeves over shorts and t-shirts; a lot of other countries are less casual than the US and many places of worship won't even let you in with short sleeves.
I did bring camera but almost never used it. And no laptop. Not even any books. But if you are going to be doing everything off a smart phone (books, camera, writing with a neat little folding keyboard, even maps) then bring power stick and a charger that will let you do both at once.
Then there's a few other things that haven't quite made Three Rules level:
4. Learn "Hello" and "Thank you." This isn't always exact or plausible...getting the courtesy's out in Greece could be a race, Italy has way too many nuances of greeting and good-byes to easily memorize, and Japan is such a politeness-driven country it is well worth learning a variety of thankful and apologetic words (mine were Ohio gozaimasu, konbanwa, ano, dozo, ii desu....but if you learn nothing else, arigato will get you a long way.)
5. Watch people. This seems obvious. And like above it isn't always possible. I came close to getting on a bus in Athens before I noticed nobody was using cash...instead they flashed a card and there was a beeping sound. So then I started asking around where you bought that ticket. In Japan, there is a very clear understanding of which staircase goes up and which goes down so watch the crowd before you try to plunge Up the Down Staircase. A little watching of when and what the locals are doing will make you look a lot less like an Ugly American. (My counter-example in Greece was trying to figure out the correct way to drink coffee. I couldn't find anyone doing it, and asking was no help because in the places I was, the staff had long decided the crazy tourists were right no matter what they did.)
6. Adjust. I really shouldn't have to say this. If you want bed your way, burger made your way, toilet the way it is at home, then why are you traveling? If you really can't deal and just want to look at the sights then there are options. There are package tours that shift you from Western-Style hotel to Western-Style hotel in the air-conditioned embrace of a tour bus and the comforting arm of a tour guide. Or just stay home and watch the movie. I've witnessed far too many travelers who couldn't re-adjust to their expectations that coffee would be free with the buffet in Berlin, that there would be chairs at a noodle shop in Tokyo, that they could pay with American dollars in London. Instead of taking a step back and realizing "this is different here...so what else is different that I could be enjoying the benefits of?" they start arguing with the server. For food, for beds, for all sorts of things, my advice is try it. If you don't like it, then no shame on you and you'll find something you like eventually. If you do, though...that's something you've learned and might even take home with you.
7. The two-week rule. I've failed on this as often as I've followed it, but the idea is you want to stay at a place long enough to get past the "we have to climb the Eiffel and visit the Louve and Notre Dame..." Actually, you'll never visit everything in Paris. Point being, the first week is rushing around doing the typical tourist spots and the must-see's. The second week is when you can relax and take in the place. Sit in a cafe and people-watch; the pressure is done. Around a week is when you slowly transition from visiting to staying; you know the street layout, which buses you usually take, the place you like to eat at. Where to buy paper and do laundry. And this goes both ways. To the locals you move from "today's tourist" to "that quiet American with the crazy beard who's been coming in here every day."
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With all the above commotion, though, I'm actually making progress on the novel. Have a draft now of the key moment when my protagonist puts on the mask for the first time.
Checked some more geography and I still haven't tracked down any Roman ruins or active digs in the Bad Münster area. Not that it matters for the plot; a medieval well is just as good for me. I did, however, discover a nice Roman mine that's about 50 km Northwest of Frankfurt. So far I've been honest with geography and although I may be adding a few things that aren't quite right (like transplanting the torchlight parade from another medieval fair to the one at Bad Münster) I haven't actually...lied.
Checked up on taking a train from Frankfurt to Venice. One day (or an overnight), a few hundred Euros. Depending on what times I plug in, though, the route planner either runs me through Switzerland or an Eastern route through Austria. Which possibly touches Salzburg (I've spent a couple days there). And also passes through München. That is, Munich (where I've also been, but only to change trains). And the story is set in October.
Oho. Thing is, the end of the shoulder season is late October and Oktoberfest actually ends on the first Sunday in October. My protagonist is also taking the latest flight she can before the prices go up and for me that was the 28th. So...move the shoulder earlier, or move Oktoberfest? Oh, yeah, and there's Ohi Day on the 28th, although the people I talked to in Crete didn't seem to think it was that much of a deal, an Athenian might disagree and in any case would play perfectly into what I want to say about the history of Greece after the Classical Era.
Sigh. I should have done something other than Germany. Kept the story in Greece, maybe included Crete. The thing about the German detour is that the way it is currently plotted she's going to be exploring around the Rhine and the Stein, into Bavaria and then to Austria, through the turned-cuff of the Italian boot and to the city of Venice (possibly stopping in Padua or Verona first), and then take a boat down the Adriatic. She'll be a seasoned -- well, semi-seasoned -- traveller by the time she gets back to Athens, and a lot of the first-time-out-figuring-stuff-out stuff I'd plotted was in the Athenian setting.
Saturday, November 10, 2018
Digital Nomad
I've travelled before. Paris, London, Tokyo, Berlin. (And a bit beyond those capitals; Kyoto, city of a thousand shrines; the Rhine Tal and a train to Salzburg; the forest -- and boulders! -- of Fontainebleau; down the Thames to Greenwich...)
I pack light. I write everything in a little notebook, all the directions and hotel addresses and travel dates I'm going to need to know.
This time, though, I made a change. A big one.
I didn't pack a map.
On previous trips I've packed around a camera and even a laptop, plus a paperback book or two, and a travel guide or two. I did have a camera in my bag but this time everything, from journal to light reading to, yes, the map was in my hip pocket.

Yeah. iPhone. I got permission from IT for roaming and up to a gig of data. I loaded up with a tourist guide and a couple of books (including a copy of that great new translation of The Odyssey). I made sure I had plenty of space for pictures.
Also picked up a folding keyboard which made it so vastly much easier to take lengthly notes on the road.
In the column of "That worked fairly well" the GPS was a boon from the gods. The streets in the Greek cities I was exploring never ran in the same direction for more than a handful of meters, were narrow enough to block all possible landmarks from their confines, and street signs were often hard to come by. Not that they helped. Maybe if I had been forced to read street signs I would have eventually gotten the hang of written Greek, but most of it remained "egg nog, egg nog" to me.
Not helped by the inconsistent romanization. On a bus schedule I had, the "Heraklion" route went from "Iraklion." On a pair of street signs I found, you were either entering "Tylissos" or "Tylisos." Even "Chania" was sometimes "Hania." Yeah...I recommend learning your Greek alphabet because that's a wee bit more consistent (there, the problem is that the characters are simplified and substituted in very odd ways on the electronic signs inside and around public transit, meaning it's not enough just to know it; you need to be comfortable with it.)
Also, between Apple's "Map" ap and Google Maps, fire roads and trails were all wrong and coverage of even major museums was spotty. Nor could either ap really handle public transit or even figure out a driving route that didn't put you going down a public dock. Or a walking route that didn't put you on the highway.
The digital bubble worries me here. I don't mean the way you might be wandering around with your eyes on the GPS direction widget instead of, you know, traffic. I mean that even in my home town, close to the heart of Silicon Valley, restaurants and shops I know damn well exist aren't listed on the Maps ap. It was worse in Heraklion, where I could find the local Gap store but not a knitting supply store that way.
So. For pictures, the phone was good enough. Most of what I was taking was museum exhibits anyhow. I wasn't trying to make pretty pictures, I was documenting what I found so I would be able to look it up later.
Okay, mostly.
In the column of "needs work," I had aps for the companies where I had reserved hotels and purchased flights, but those aps rarely told me what I needed to know. The only time one was of any use at all was to display the address of a hotel in proper Greek for my cab driver, but the ap insisted on truncating the address and could not be convinced to scroll or re-scale.
There was an odd experience at the Agora (around the foot of the Acropolis); a bunch of people had some kind of pre-printed ticket that was scanned through easily, but the rest of us were blocked from entry because the credit card reader was down (for some reason that meant cash was off limits as well. Or the staff was so focused on one problem they didn't want to take time to do the other). That actually worked out well for me in the end because I barely had time to get to the Acropolis then out to meet my ferry after all.
Every experience at a clerk or boarding agent, though, no ap or printout was needed or wanted. Just my name and my passport. Just as well. My experience with e-tickets is every single one has a different ap, and all those aps are bloatware, a drag on your data, and possible spyware to boot.
The nadir had to be the Pireaus-to-Iraklion ferry; there you take a printout of your receipt (you must have this) to the ferry company's office in town where they print you an official boarding pass (sometimes for a small charge). Not terribly efficient. Or obvious.
I brought a power adaptor and a battery pack good for up to two full charges.
That's the first thing you notice about doing everything with a smart phone. I don't know if it is the GPS (and running two different map aps at the same time) or all the photographs but battery charge goes like that. I ended up spending significant time with the phone in one pocket and the battery pack in another, trickling in more juice as I walked.
This is something the primary manufacturers haven't quite gotten yet. Apple continues to make their gear smaller and thinner, but as the customers are using their devices more continually and at higher consumption rates (brighter screens, streaming videos, flashlight aps) those internal batteries are no longer sufficient to get through a day. Charging stations are springing up. There's a new version of Wardriving out there as people search out unguarded outlets in coffee shops and other places. I changed seats on the ferry to hog an outlet I found on the floor there (eventually I gave it up to someone else after I had enough charge to hold me).
And of course battery packs, battery packs everywhere.
Other odd follow-on effects. Payphones are long gone, of course. But clocks in public spaces are also on the way out. It is odd to be in an airport and not be able to find a single clock anywhere. Not even on the departures board is there a time display. Which is pretty stupid if you think about it. Sure, everyone has a smart phone (supposedly) and those automatically synch to local time...but only if they get a signal! When you are changing time zones, you are also roaming, and possibly out of coverage for the frequency range of your phone, which means no automatic updates.
So all in all, it worked, but I'm not giving up on the old ways completely. A little notebook with everything important copied to it is still the most important thing you can pack.
I pack light. I write everything in a little notebook, all the directions and hotel addresses and travel dates I'm going to need to know.
This time, though, I made a change. A big one.
I didn't pack a map.
On previous trips I've packed around a camera and even a laptop, plus a paperback book or two, and a travel guide or two. I did have a camera in my bag but this time everything, from journal to light reading to, yes, the map was in my hip pocket.
Yeah. iPhone. I got permission from IT for roaming and up to a gig of data. I loaded up with a tourist guide and a couple of books (including a copy of that great new translation of The Odyssey). I made sure I had plenty of space for pictures.
Also picked up a folding keyboard which made it so vastly much easier to take lengthly notes on the road.
In the column of "That worked fairly well" the GPS was a boon from the gods. The streets in the Greek cities I was exploring never ran in the same direction for more than a handful of meters, were narrow enough to block all possible landmarks from their confines, and street signs were often hard to come by. Not that they helped. Maybe if I had been forced to read street signs I would have eventually gotten the hang of written Greek, but most of it remained "egg nog, egg nog" to me.
Not helped by the inconsistent romanization. On a bus schedule I had, the "Heraklion" route went from "Iraklion." On a pair of street signs I found, you were either entering "Tylissos" or "Tylisos." Even "Chania" was sometimes "Hania." Yeah...I recommend learning your Greek alphabet because that's a wee bit more consistent (there, the problem is that the characters are simplified and substituted in very odd ways on the electronic signs inside and around public transit, meaning it's not enough just to know it; you need to be comfortable with it.)
Also, between Apple's "Map" ap and Google Maps, fire roads and trails were all wrong and coverage of even major museums was spotty. Nor could either ap really handle public transit or even figure out a driving route that didn't put you going down a public dock. Or a walking route that didn't put you on the highway.
The digital bubble worries me here. I don't mean the way you might be wandering around with your eyes on the GPS direction widget instead of, you know, traffic. I mean that even in my home town, close to the heart of Silicon Valley, restaurants and shops I know damn well exist aren't listed on the Maps ap. It was worse in Heraklion, where I could find the local Gap store but not a knitting supply store that way.
So. For pictures, the phone was good enough. Most of what I was taking was museum exhibits anyhow. I wasn't trying to make pretty pictures, I was documenting what I found so I would be able to look it up later.
Okay, mostly.
In the column of "needs work," I had aps for the companies where I had reserved hotels and purchased flights, but those aps rarely told me what I needed to know. The only time one was of any use at all was to display the address of a hotel in proper Greek for my cab driver, but the ap insisted on truncating the address and could not be convinced to scroll or re-scale.
There was an odd experience at the Agora (around the foot of the Acropolis); a bunch of people had some kind of pre-printed ticket that was scanned through easily, but the rest of us were blocked from entry because the credit card reader was down (for some reason that meant cash was off limits as well. Or the staff was so focused on one problem they didn't want to take time to do the other). That actually worked out well for me in the end because I barely had time to get to the Acropolis then out to meet my ferry after all.
Every experience at a clerk or boarding agent, though, no ap or printout was needed or wanted. Just my name and my passport. Just as well. My experience with e-tickets is every single one has a different ap, and all those aps are bloatware, a drag on your data, and possible spyware to boot.
The nadir had to be the Pireaus-to-Iraklion ferry; there you take a printout of your receipt (you must have this) to the ferry company's office in town where they print you an official boarding pass (sometimes for a small charge). Not terribly efficient. Or obvious.
I brought a power adaptor and a battery pack good for up to two full charges.
That's the first thing you notice about doing everything with a smart phone. I don't know if it is the GPS (and running two different map aps at the same time) or all the photographs but battery charge goes like that. I ended up spending significant time with the phone in one pocket and the battery pack in another, trickling in more juice as I walked.
This is something the primary manufacturers haven't quite gotten yet. Apple continues to make their gear smaller and thinner, but as the customers are using their devices more continually and at higher consumption rates (brighter screens, streaming videos, flashlight aps) those internal batteries are no longer sufficient to get through a day. Charging stations are springing up. There's a new version of Wardriving out there as people search out unguarded outlets in coffee shops and other places. I changed seats on the ferry to hog an outlet I found on the floor there (eventually I gave it up to someone else after I had enough charge to hold me).
And of course battery packs, battery packs everywhere.
Other odd follow-on effects. Payphones are long gone, of course. But clocks in public spaces are also on the way out. It is odd to be in an airport and not be able to find a single clock anywhere. Not even on the departures board is there a time display. Which is pretty stupid if you think about it. Sure, everyone has a smart phone (supposedly) and those automatically synch to local time...but only if they get a signal! When you are changing time zones, you are also roaming, and possibly out of coverage for the frequency range of your phone, which means no automatic updates.
So all in all, it worked, but I'm not giving up on the old ways completely. A little notebook with everything important copied to it is still the most important thing you can pack.
Thursday, November 1, 2018
Always coming home
Odysseus had the right of it. Hang out with the swineherd for a while. Scope out the place and see what your friends and co-workers are up to safe behind the anonymity of a disguise. It is tough re-shifting your priorities back to job and friends, especially when you've been out on your own adventuring.
Travel gives you perspective. Hell of it is, the first thing I noticed is how filthy my place is at the moment. That's now shot up to the top of the priority list, and not just dusting but the big repairs I've been putting off, like re-doing some plaster, hanging new blinds, etc.
And the novel? Yes I learned things. I could say I am ready now...I gathered enough of what was important to me so I could start writing actual scenes.
But I have new perspective there, too. I saw a lot, I thought a lot. I crossed the Aegean with a copy of The Odyssey in my hand. I strolled the hills and listened to the goats and walked the stones of Minoan buildings.
It has become oddly much less clear where the demarkations are between Minoan, Mycenaean, Iron Age and Classical Greece are. Seeing so many of the artifacts close-up this way illuminates the similarities and connections as much as it illuminates the differences and changes. There are continuities of language and religion and material culture.
It is these continuities archaeologists are forced to use to expand upon the material they are able to gather. We don't know anything of Mycenaean religious practices, for instance, but there are familiar names which appear and we do know something of how the later Greeks worshipped the gods with those appellations.
And this is particularly true for the writer of fiction, who can not just turn the camera away from those parts of the scene that are inconvenient, inconclusive, or entirely impossible to verify with ground data.
More, there is a dark reflection of this; just as the historian has to borrow from the better-known to fill in the gaps of our knowledge, the writer is moved to borrow from what is better known to the reader in order to smooth their entry into the world of the story.
The place where this has currently become an impossible snarl for me is that many people have written many kinds of stories within this setting. Within the past few days I've been reading a vigorous and insightful new translation of Homer, browsing (with the filter of yet another language to bear with, as it is in French) a children's book of The Odyssey with the cutest illustrations, and sample chapters of a book that re-tells The Illiad from the point of view of the women of Troy (Euripides got there first), and of yet another Lara Croft clone that purports to be about an artifact from late Bronze Age Crete. Oh, yes; and reading way too many attempts by way too many museums to batter a public-friendly description into two hundred words or less.
And it should be obvious to everybody but getting it right (even if it were possible to get it all right) has little to do with making it readable. Or getting it to sell.
I made this argument myself before I set off. As I alluded to above, if look and feel is important to me, then I am ready, now, to reproduce the smells and sounds of the landscape of modern Crete (and only a few academics will know or care that not all the fauna I describe is properly contemporary). If getting that gut punch of five-senses description and strong characters and conflict and a little action is what is important (as I believe it is) then being sloppy with the research is okay. Being intentionally "sloppy" with the research is even better (that is, borrowing from what we can know, such as worship practices of 1st century Greece and Rome, or horticulture of the Christian age, but using details that came from life and thus carry that ineffable aura of veracity).
And so, yeah, research generated new questions. And some of those have sent me back to the top of the stack; what am I trying to write, and who for?
Travel gives you perspective. Hell of it is, the first thing I noticed is how filthy my place is at the moment. That's now shot up to the top of the priority list, and not just dusting but the big repairs I've been putting off, like re-doing some plaster, hanging new blinds, etc.
And the novel? Yes I learned things. I could say I am ready now...I gathered enough of what was important to me so I could start writing actual scenes.
But I have new perspective there, too. I saw a lot, I thought a lot. I crossed the Aegean with a copy of The Odyssey in my hand. I strolled the hills and listened to the goats and walked the stones of Minoan buildings.
It has become oddly much less clear where the demarkations are between Minoan, Mycenaean, Iron Age and Classical Greece are. Seeing so many of the artifacts close-up this way illuminates the similarities and connections as much as it illuminates the differences and changes. There are continuities of language and religion and material culture.
It is these continuities archaeologists are forced to use to expand upon the material they are able to gather. We don't know anything of Mycenaean religious practices, for instance, but there are familiar names which appear and we do know something of how the later Greeks worshipped the gods with those appellations.
And this is particularly true for the writer of fiction, who can not just turn the camera away from those parts of the scene that are inconvenient, inconclusive, or entirely impossible to verify with ground data.
More, there is a dark reflection of this; just as the historian has to borrow from the better-known to fill in the gaps of our knowledge, the writer is moved to borrow from what is better known to the reader in order to smooth their entry into the world of the story.
The place where this has currently become an impossible snarl for me is that many people have written many kinds of stories within this setting. Within the past few days I've been reading a vigorous and insightful new translation of Homer, browsing (with the filter of yet another language to bear with, as it is in French) a children's book of The Odyssey with the cutest illustrations, and sample chapters of a book that re-tells The Illiad from the point of view of the women of Troy (Euripides got there first), and of yet another Lara Croft clone that purports to be about an artifact from late Bronze Age Crete. Oh, yes; and reading way too many attempts by way too many museums to batter a public-friendly description into two hundred words or less.
And it should be obvious to everybody but getting it right (even if it were possible to get it all right) has little to do with making it readable. Or getting it to sell.
I made this argument myself before I set off. As I alluded to above, if look and feel is important to me, then I am ready, now, to reproduce the smells and sounds of the landscape of modern Crete (and only a few academics will know or care that not all the fauna I describe is properly contemporary). If getting that gut punch of five-senses description and strong characters and conflict and a little action is what is important (as I believe it is) then being sloppy with the research is okay. Being intentionally "sloppy" with the research is even better (that is, borrowing from what we can know, such as worship practices of 1st century Greece and Rome, or horticulture of the Christian age, but using details that came from life and thus carry that ineffable aura of veracity).
And so, yeah, research generated new questions. And some of those have sent me back to the top of the stack; what am I trying to write, and who for?
Tuesday, October 30, 2018
Provenance, Provenience, Parthenon
Here’s the first image: troups of well-dressed Europeans climbing the maze of stairs, teetering on the artistically fragmented walls, admiring the Victorian brown collonades and the fashion-magazine stylish repainted frescoes.
Here’s the second image. A Turkish powder magazine explodes, delivering the final indignity to the creaking, discolored ruins of Athen’s heart.
Two different cities, two different monuments, two different sets of problems in archaeological restoration and the often complex relationship between a modern nation and their cultural heritage.
Knossos is terribly underfunded. It seems strange at first glance. Athens is scarred by their economic woes; abandoned buildings with gaping windows like rotting teeth in faces covered with graffiti, pavements scored with broken walks and open drains and drifts of garbage. By contrast Heraklion, (from the harbor at least), is clean and modern and wears proudly the remodeling for the 2004 Summer Olympics. Even the tourists look wealthier.
(The contrast is even stronger at Chania. This is basically a sea-side resort town. The history underfoot is barely remarked upon; in a long dockside strip of eateries and bars and trinket shops no signage showed and only a handful of people seemed to know there was a full replica Minoan sailing vessel on display nearby -- among the other archaeological and historical treasures.)
Work has all but stopped at the site of the Palace of Knossos. Down at the Heraklion Museum they speak proudly of the restoration efforts on their collection (which as with so many begins with removing the efforts of the previous generation). But at Knossos itself, the best description of the present efforts is stabilization. Keeping it from disintegrating further before the money for actual work flows in again.
The site is under-documented by the standards of the new Acropolis Museum. But there is some justification in calling that a special case. Knossos is layered, an archaeological palimpsest and a restoration bricolage, and that is part of the problem.
Cleverly, the Knossos signage cleaves to an essentially Sir Arthur Evans narrative. Although this is couched with qualifiers like, “Evans called this...” or even, “Evans mistakenly believed...” the singular narrative through-line is Knossos as Evans and his generation experienced it and understood it.
It could be argued that this is the best approach for most visitors. It is one step more honest than simply saying, “This is a Lustral Basin” but it doesn’t drag the visitor into the full depths of complexity and confusion.
In the States, the age at which a building can apply for protected landmark status is the ripe old age of fifty. Archaeology can be done — archaeology has been done — where some of the original participants are still alive.
So what is the best way to approach a palimpsest like, say, the Koules guarding the Heraklion harbor? Restore it to the Venetian fort that stood so long, or the Ottoman modifications when they finally took it and, too, produced a grim history in and around it? Restore whatever mute evidence the Second Wold War may have left, or restore it to the Byzantine walls? And do you keep the moule, or do you re-float the Venetian ships that made its foundation and make them your exhibit?
In short, one could almost defend presenting Knossos as the historical efforts of Sir Arthur Evans. But let’s contrast.
There was a Mycenaean complex (probably a fort) on the Acropolis and Cyclopian walls about the heights of The Rock. There were several generations of earlier temples. And there were later, largely civil uses of the centerpiece structure. But against all of this the Periclean Parthenon is both the architectural and artistic height of all the constructions that site has seen, and the symbolic centerpiece of the Athenian democracy and the Greek Classical world.
So it makes sense to restore towards this Ur-Acropolis. But unlike Knossos, where the multiple levels of occupation and (sometimes questionable!) “restoration” are ill-documented at the site, the Parthenon and particularly the new Acropolis Museum carefully and clearly indicate the layers of provenance involved.
(The Provenience of the parts of the Parthenon are, unlike in almost every other archaeological context, quite simple. At least, for the sculpted facade. In modern parlance, the provenience of an artifact is the exact find location. In this case, the sculptures started life on the building. And not in the British Museum, as the exhibits at the Acropolis Museum take pains to point out!)
At the site itself, every tiny fragment of column has been carefully measured and 3D modeled and the correct location determined in the world’s largest picture puzzle. Where the originals are unavailable (lost to time or to Lord Elgin’s luggage) replacements are provided in plaster cast and fresh white marble.
This allows for both appreciation of the total aesthetic — the building as it would have been — and understanding of what parts are historical and what parts (the shining white parts) are not. It is something that Knossos could have benefitted from, except there the story is far more complicated. How does one mark a Dolphin Fresco that Evans had on a wall and modern papers believe was more likely on the floor, and in any case is in the relative safety of a museum with only a replica on site?
The thing is, though, Evans was right. Not in his guesses, but science marches on. Not in his reconstruction efforts — which like earlier efforts at the Acropolis eventually damaged the stone — but, again, the science of restoration marches on. He was right in doing what he did at the time he did it. The site would be gone now, farmland or a condo, if he hadn’t made it something those Victorians could admire and paint and have their photographs taken on as they lined up in the long coats and top hats along some crumbling wall.
There is something to be said for the aesthetics of a ruin. But you get more public attention, more tourist dollars, more help in preservation, if you have something that looks more like a building. I am tempted to say Knossos doesn’t go far enough. There is a virtual replication in the cloud and a place in town where you can rent a tablet and a VR headset and walk around a fully-restored building, bull-leapers and all.
Imagine if something like that was available on site! I’ve seen this. In Berlin (at the grand Museum für Naturkunde) there is a paleontological exhibit where by standing behind a viewing class the dry bones can be clothed in muscle and skin and feathers and placed in their natural habitat. There is an effort somewhere that has a huge collection of those now stark white marble statues that with another press of a button clothes them with light, bringing back the colours of history.
(The new Acropolis Museum makes crafty compromise by displaying in air-conditioned safety the actual Kouros and Kore from the Parthenon but placing beside them small samples of contemporary reconstruction of the original paint job.)
Above all, however, both these places are symbols. Knossos is merely one photogenic touchstone (when taken from exactly the right angle and cropped ever so carefully; the Evans restorations are, when all is said and gone, pitifully small bits of wall and sequences of column). It stands along side of reproductions of the Dolphin Frescoes and Bull Leaper and Bull Rhyton and so on (which also are rather more Victorian restoration than original artifact).
(It is also informative that the “Mask of Agamemnon,” that in many circles is the emblematic and much-reproduced artifact of that peculiar juncture where the Classic and Homeric tradition meet the historical reality, is presented in Athens at the National Museum of Archaeology as just another shaft-grave death mask. But then, much as Knossos is a monument to Sir Arthur, the largest collection in Athens is assembled and presented as, "Here's what Schliemann dug up.")
The Minoans are today a way that Crete reinvents itself as something other than a backwater island in a nation with a broken economy. And of course a way to draw in the tourist dollar. Their imagery is everywhere (I say imagery because the actual artifacts are thin on the ground but reproductions are everywhere, from made-in-China caliber Phaistos Disk reproductions available at every other souvenir stand, to nicer hand-painted miniatures of the Prince of the Lilies, and — moving from not-so-sublime to worthy-of-ridicule — the Court Ladies fresco incorporated into the plastic banner on the Coke stands.)
But there’s no depth in it. No wearing of the mantle of the true progenitor of the Greek Miracle, or at least the past glory of a Minoan Thallasocracy. Now all there is, is the Minoan Bus-Ocracy (Minoan Lines, the most visible of the huge Bus Tour operations that plow through the place like Achilles and his ships on a “foraging” expedition against the defenseless villages of the Anatolian Coast. The tour buses are everywhere, the most visible part of a massive efficient machine that delivers door-to-door from airport to air-conditioned hotel to guided tour, and everything and everyone else must bend to accommodate them.)
It is simply presented as, “This is historical; look at it and be impressed.” The same can be said, alas, for the Cretan’s attempts to share their more recent cultural heritage with the world. “It is traditional,” they say, as if that is enough; no explanation, no context. I can stand on one foot and hum “Barnacle Bill” and call that traditional and it would be, if only for me. If they truly want people to engage with the historic folkcrafts or the nautical tradition or the terrible and inspiring stories of the Cretan Resistance, they need to provide more.
(At Arolithos Traditional Cretan Village they laud their open museum of “living history” displays. They even offer their vision of engagement; for ten Euros your kid can learn a Camp Runnamucka version of the mosaic work the Byzantines brought to such a high peak. But it stops there. One simplistic, one-way presentation. Don’t ask questions.)
What I’m saying is the curation is abysmal. There are few placards and those are uninformative, and to a man or woman the docents are both uniformed about the museum and its subjects and monumentally uninterested in either them or in the act of conversation itself. (Unfortunately this isn’t a peculiarity of museum staff. Shopkeepers also make you work for the privilege to give them your money.)
I do have to say that even the best of the Athenian museums also fall down a bit by world standards. There wasn’t a catalog number in sight. It was hard sometimes to even nail down era or collection. I’d be tempted to say this stems from the embarrassment of riches; the collections are so vast they can only present them in patterns, like “Pots that include an octopus in their decoration.” But that’s another discussion!
What really separates Athens in this sketch here is that the Parthenon is Athens. As Athena herself remains Athena Potnia, the patron saint and protector of the city. The Parthenon is not a place disconnected from current life, like the Palace of Knossos or even the Sinking of the “Elli”; it is effectively the Cathedral of the majority religion. (Not that is functional in any current rituals, or even connected to the professed and officially recognized faiths.)
And I have to stop here and say these aren’t unique issues.
Besides the radically different standards of different museums and monuments worldwide — no nation, no city is without fault — there are basic questions about preservation and accessibility that are not dissimilar to the problems a writer of history (or historical fiction) faces.
There are always market forces. What was important to Athens in the early twentieth century led to what the Parthenon is today. What was inspiring to the Victorians is — as had been the case many times in the past, from Napoleon back through to fifth Dynasty Egyptians — what led to the preservation of what we have today and the interest that raised generations of scholars who would go on to advance our current knowledge.
Monuments and museums have to chase the buck. They have to work within those blurry lines of dramatization and simplification. They have to speak to the viewer whether it is aesthetics or spiritual connection or lessons for the present or (the illusion of?) learning and/or self-actualisation. To do less is to lose the museum, the collection, the monument itself. Athens at least has state support for their grand symbol of the state, but even there money has to come in or the monument doesn't survive.
But beyond serving the needs of the archaeological and historical community, professional and amateur, the museum or monument should, I think, also serve the real needs of the public.
I would like to think the need of most of that public is the sense of transcendence of one’s own mortal lifespan; of being able to walk where the Poets had walked. Of having for a moment a grasp of the boundless. I’d prefer an interest in understanding a different people and different ways, if for no other reason because that helps us to lift our own blinders and for that moment see our own predictions and presumptions as if with alien eyes. But in any case it beats an interest in boasting rights (the selfie-taker infesting modern monuments would be utterly familiar in needs and process and rationale to the Victorians who went to Athens and Rome and, eventually, Crete.)
To speak to that majority audience you need to streamline. You may need to reconstruct or fill in (depending on the circumstance). You need in short to lie, to commit sins both of omission and confabulation.
But that still doesn’t keep me from wanting that other layer to be available. From wanting those access points, from catalog numbers to educated docents, that allow one to drill down beyond the repainted facade to something deeper. Instead my experience across Greece was one of active resistance.
There’s a whole other sideline here about folkloric crafts. There are thriving communities interested in, keeping alive, being inspired by, and otherwise practicing crafts from history or reconstructed from archaeology. It upset me that the points of access were almost nonexistent on Crete despite the several clever and fascinating folkways museums.
Take spinning and weaving. However. There was a small exhibit sponsored by some government agency trying to grow the market for Cretan silk that tried to produce a kit to let you try pulling silken threads from a cocoon yourself. Alas it was badly explained, poorly presented, and none of the exhibiters had any idea how it actually worked.
The one access I got is through something that is recognized as a living craft within a slightly different circle. Even though in large parts of Crete the part of the Cretan Lyre has been taken over by the more flexible and easier-to-obtain violin, there are people who sell and play and build and teach the lyre who are completely open and supportive to the idea of someone new learning the instrument. I suspect (although I haven't the direct experience to prove) that cooking could, within limits, also benefit from coming from a different context that bypasses the blind uncomprehending, "But we have postcards for sale! What else do you want?"
And, yes, as someone fascinated by the practicalities of daily life artifacts, it is disheartening to find at even a good museum — one that recognizes and labels loom weights and spindle whorls — the distinctive and informative linen-spinner’s bowl is left unremarked among a class of general household pottery. Or that a set of actual surviving clay tuyeres is simply labeled “tuyeres,” losing that brazen opportunity to talk about the ingenious period smelting practices.
But this should be no surprise. When the sleek mechanism is designed to ferry the tourist as smoothly and quickly as possible through the monument and into the gift shop, the very concept of dialog is anathema. Only a passive audience can be processed with efficiency. And the shame is that the audience seems largely satisfied. Whatever experience they were seeking, they seem to have gained it somewhere between the massive bus that made sure Cretan soil never touched their pristine footwear, and the hotel amenities that made it as much as possible like any other large hotel anywhere in the world.
The visitor who wants, needs, and can accept more (I saw one visitor at the National in Athens who was getting an expert lecture from his friend, another visitor -- a man I am almost certain was Eric Cline himself!) is the outlier. They have to fend for themselves. The visitor who has moved even further from the mainstream, like the growing groups of historical and folkloric re-creationists, is even more left with no easy access to what they were hoping to find.
And there is no simple answer to this. It is not a fault, per se. Certainly not one of any agency. It is merely a function of how things work, how they -- apparently -- must work, but certainly how they have currently evolved.
And for all of that said....yes, the material is still there, and I got something worthwhile from it.
Here’s the second image. A Turkish powder magazine explodes, delivering the final indignity to the creaking, discolored ruins of Athen’s heart.
Two different cities, two different monuments, two different sets of problems in archaeological restoration and the often complex relationship between a modern nation and their cultural heritage.
Knossos is terribly underfunded. It seems strange at first glance. Athens is scarred by their economic woes; abandoned buildings with gaping windows like rotting teeth in faces covered with graffiti, pavements scored with broken walks and open drains and drifts of garbage. By contrast Heraklion, (from the harbor at least), is clean and modern and wears proudly the remodeling for the 2004 Summer Olympics. Even the tourists look wealthier.
(The contrast is even stronger at Chania. This is basically a sea-side resort town. The history underfoot is barely remarked upon; in a long dockside strip of eateries and bars and trinket shops no signage showed and only a handful of people seemed to know there was a full replica Minoan sailing vessel on display nearby -- among the other archaeological and historical treasures.)
Work has all but stopped at the site of the Palace of Knossos. Down at the Heraklion Museum they speak proudly of the restoration efforts on their collection (which as with so many begins with removing the efforts of the previous generation). But at Knossos itself, the best description of the present efforts is stabilization. Keeping it from disintegrating further before the money for actual work flows in again.
The site is under-documented by the standards of the new Acropolis Museum. But there is some justification in calling that a special case. Knossos is layered, an archaeological palimpsest and a restoration bricolage, and that is part of the problem.
Cleverly, the Knossos signage cleaves to an essentially Sir Arthur Evans narrative. Although this is couched with qualifiers like, “Evans called this...” or even, “Evans mistakenly believed...” the singular narrative through-line is Knossos as Evans and his generation experienced it and understood it.
It could be argued that this is the best approach for most visitors. It is one step more honest than simply saying, “This is a Lustral Basin” but it doesn’t drag the visitor into the full depths of complexity and confusion.
In the States, the age at which a building can apply for protected landmark status is the ripe old age of fifty. Archaeology can be done — archaeology has been done — where some of the original participants are still alive.
So what is the best way to approach a palimpsest like, say, the Koules guarding the Heraklion harbor? Restore it to the Venetian fort that stood so long, or the Ottoman modifications when they finally took it and, too, produced a grim history in and around it? Restore whatever mute evidence the Second Wold War may have left, or restore it to the Byzantine walls? And do you keep the moule, or do you re-float the Venetian ships that made its foundation and make them your exhibit?
In short, one could almost defend presenting Knossos as the historical efforts of Sir Arthur Evans. But let’s contrast.
There was a Mycenaean complex (probably a fort) on the Acropolis and Cyclopian walls about the heights of The Rock. There were several generations of earlier temples. And there were later, largely civil uses of the centerpiece structure. But against all of this the Periclean Parthenon is both the architectural and artistic height of all the constructions that site has seen, and the symbolic centerpiece of the Athenian democracy and the Greek Classical world.
So it makes sense to restore towards this Ur-Acropolis. But unlike Knossos, where the multiple levels of occupation and (sometimes questionable!) “restoration” are ill-documented at the site, the Parthenon and particularly the new Acropolis Museum carefully and clearly indicate the layers of provenance involved.
(The Provenience of the parts of the Parthenon are, unlike in almost every other archaeological context, quite simple. At least, for the sculpted facade. In modern parlance, the provenience of an artifact is the exact find location. In this case, the sculptures started life on the building. And not in the British Museum, as the exhibits at the Acropolis Museum take pains to point out!)
At the site itself, every tiny fragment of column has been carefully measured and 3D modeled and the correct location determined in the world’s largest picture puzzle. Where the originals are unavailable (lost to time or to Lord Elgin’s luggage) replacements are provided in plaster cast and fresh white marble.
This allows for both appreciation of the total aesthetic — the building as it would have been — and understanding of what parts are historical and what parts (the shining white parts) are not. It is something that Knossos could have benefitted from, except there the story is far more complicated. How does one mark a Dolphin Fresco that Evans had on a wall and modern papers believe was more likely on the floor, and in any case is in the relative safety of a museum with only a replica on site?
The thing is, though, Evans was right. Not in his guesses, but science marches on. Not in his reconstruction efforts — which like earlier efforts at the Acropolis eventually damaged the stone — but, again, the science of restoration marches on. He was right in doing what he did at the time he did it. The site would be gone now, farmland or a condo, if he hadn’t made it something those Victorians could admire and paint and have their photographs taken on as they lined up in the long coats and top hats along some crumbling wall.
There is something to be said for the aesthetics of a ruin. But you get more public attention, more tourist dollars, more help in preservation, if you have something that looks more like a building. I am tempted to say Knossos doesn’t go far enough. There is a virtual replication in the cloud and a place in town where you can rent a tablet and a VR headset and walk around a fully-restored building, bull-leapers and all.
Imagine if something like that was available on site! I’ve seen this. In Berlin (at the grand Museum für Naturkunde) there is a paleontological exhibit where by standing behind a viewing class the dry bones can be clothed in muscle and skin and feathers and placed in their natural habitat. There is an effort somewhere that has a huge collection of those now stark white marble statues that with another press of a button clothes them with light, bringing back the colours of history.
(The new Acropolis Museum makes crafty compromise by displaying in air-conditioned safety the actual Kouros and Kore from the Parthenon but placing beside them small samples of contemporary reconstruction of the original paint job.)
Above all, however, both these places are symbols. Knossos is merely one photogenic touchstone (when taken from exactly the right angle and cropped ever so carefully; the Evans restorations are, when all is said and gone, pitifully small bits of wall and sequences of column). It stands along side of reproductions of the Dolphin Frescoes and Bull Leaper and Bull Rhyton and so on (which also are rather more Victorian restoration than original artifact).
(It is also informative that the “Mask of Agamemnon,” that in many circles is the emblematic and much-reproduced artifact of that peculiar juncture where the Classic and Homeric tradition meet the historical reality, is presented in Athens at the National Museum of Archaeology as just another shaft-grave death mask. But then, much as Knossos is a monument to Sir Arthur, the largest collection in Athens is assembled and presented as, "Here's what Schliemann dug up.")
The Minoans are today a way that Crete reinvents itself as something other than a backwater island in a nation with a broken economy. And of course a way to draw in the tourist dollar. Their imagery is everywhere (I say imagery because the actual artifacts are thin on the ground but reproductions are everywhere, from made-in-China caliber Phaistos Disk reproductions available at every other souvenir stand, to nicer hand-painted miniatures of the Prince of the Lilies, and — moving from not-so-sublime to worthy-of-ridicule — the Court Ladies fresco incorporated into the plastic banner on the Coke stands.)
But there’s no depth in it. No wearing of the mantle of the true progenitor of the Greek Miracle, or at least the past glory of a Minoan Thallasocracy. Now all there is, is the Minoan Bus-Ocracy (Minoan Lines, the most visible of the huge Bus Tour operations that plow through the place like Achilles and his ships on a “foraging” expedition against the defenseless villages of the Anatolian Coast. The tour buses are everywhere, the most visible part of a massive efficient machine that delivers door-to-door from airport to air-conditioned hotel to guided tour, and everything and everyone else must bend to accommodate them.)
It is simply presented as, “This is historical; look at it and be impressed.” The same can be said, alas, for the Cretan’s attempts to share their more recent cultural heritage with the world. “It is traditional,” they say, as if that is enough; no explanation, no context. I can stand on one foot and hum “Barnacle Bill” and call that traditional and it would be, if only for me. If they truly want people to engage with the historic folkcrafts or the nautical tradition or the terrible and inspiring stories of the Cretan Resistance, they need to provide more.
(At Arolithos Traditional Cretan Village they laud their open museum of “living history” displays. They even offer their vision of engagement; for ten Euros your kid can learn a Camp Runnamucka version of the mosaic work the Byzantines brought to such a high peak. But it stops there. One simplistic, one-way presentation. Don’t ask questions.)
What I’m saying is the curation is abysmal. There are few placards and those are uninformative, and to a man or woman the docents are both uniformed about the museum and its subjects and monumentally uninterested in either them or in the act of conversation itself. (Unfortunately this isn’t a peculiarity of museum staff. Shopkeepers also make you work for the privilege to give them your money.)
I do have to say that even the best of the Athenian museums also fall down a bit by world standards. There wasn’t a catalog number in sight. It was hard sometimes to even nail down era or collection. I’d be tempted to say this stems from the embarrassment of riches; the collections are so vast they can only present them in patterns, like “Pots that include an octopus in their decoration.” But that’s another discussion!
What really separates Athens in this sketch here is that the Parthenon is Athens. As Athena herself remains Athena Potnia, the patron saint and protector of the city. The Parthenon is not a place disconnected from current life, like the Palace of Knossos or even the Sinking of the “Elli”; it is effectively the Cathedral of the majority religion. (Not that is functional in any current rituals, or even connected to the professed and officially recognized faiths.)
And I have to stop here and say these aren’t unique issues.
Besides the radically different standards of different museums and monuments worldwide — no nation, no city is without fault — there are basic questions about preservation and accessibility that are not dissimilar to the problems a writer of history (or historical fiction) faces.
There are always market forces. What was important to Athens in the early twentieth century led to what the Parthenon is today. What was inspiring to the Victorians is — as had been the case many times in the past, from Napoleon back through to fifth Dynasty Egyptians — what led to the preservation of what we have today and the interest that raised generations of scholars who would go on to advance our current knowledge.
Monuments and museums have to chase the buck. They have to work within those blurry lines of dramatization and simplification. They have to speak to the viewer whether it is aesthetics or spiritual connection or lessons for the present or (the illusion of?) learning and/or self-actualisation. To do less is to lose the museum, the collection, the monument itself. Athens at least has state support for their grand symbol of the state, but even there money has to come in or the monument doesn't survive.
But beyond serving the needs of the archaeological and historical community, professional and amateur, the museum or monument should, I think, also serve the real needs of the public.
I would like to think the need of most of that public is the sense of transcendence of one’s own mortal lifespan; of being able to walk where the Poets had walked. Of having for a moment a grasp of the boundless. I’d prefer an interest in understanding a different people and different ways, if for no other reason because that helps us to lift our own blinders and for that moment see our own predictions and presumptions as if with alien eyes. But in any case it beats an interest in boasting rights (the selfie-taker infesting modern monuments would be utterly familiar in needs and process and rationale to the Victorians who went to Athens and Rome and, eventually, Crete.)
To speak to that majority audience you need to streamline. You may need to reconstruct or fill in (depending on the circumstance). You need in short to lie, to commit sins both of omission and confabulation.
But that still doesn’t keep me from wanting that other layer to be available. From wanting those access points, from catalog numbers to educated docents, that allow one to drill down beyond the repainted facade to something deeper. Instead my experience across Greece was one of active resistance.
There’s a whole other sideline here about folkloric crafts. There are thriving communities interested in, keeping alive, being inspired by, and otherwise practicing crafts from history or reconstructed from archaeology. It upset me that the points of access were almost nonexistent on Crete despite the several clever and fascinating folkways museums.
Take spinning and weaving. However. There was a small exhibit sponsored by some government agency trying to grow the market for Cretan silk that tried to produce a kit to let you try pulling silken threads from a cocoon yourself. Alas it was badly explained, poorly presented, and none of the exhibiters had any idea how it actually worked.
And, yes, as someone fascinated by the practicalities of daily life artifacts, it is disheartening to find at even a good museum — one that recognizes and labels loom weights and spindle whorls — the distinctive and informative linen-spinner’s bowl is left unremarked among a class of general household pottery. Or that a set of actual surviving clay tuyeres is simply labeled “tuyeres,” losing that brazen opportunity to talk about the ingenious period smelting practices.
But this should be no surprise. When the sleek mechanism is designed to ferry the tourist as smoothly and quickly as possible through the monument and into the gift shop, the very concept of dialog is anathema. Only a passive audience can be processed with efficiency. And the shame is that the audience seems largely satisfied. Whatever experience they were seeking, they seem to have gained it somewhere between the massive bus that made sure Cretan soil never touched their pristine footwear, and the hotel amenities that made it as much as possible like any other large hotel anywhere in the world.
The visitor who wants, needs, and can accept more (I saw one visitor at the National in Athens who was getting an expert lecture from his friend, another visitor -- a man I am almost certain was Eric Cline himself!) is the outlier. They have to fend for themselves. The visitor who has moved even further from the mainstream, like the growing groups of historical and folkloric re-creationists, is even more left with no easy access to what they were hoping to find.
And there is no simple answer to this. It is not a fault, per se. Certainly not one of any agency. It is merely a function of how things work, how they -- apparently -- must work, but certainly how they have currently evolved.
And for all of that said....yes, the material is still there, and I got something worthwhile from it.
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